sunset

the dusk
is
citrus

quietly lustrous

edible

ripe

pinks

blushing

greens blues
yellows

rust-coloured

mandarins

against

a herd
of grazing
sheep

swollen

with

w

o
o

l

19 comments

  1. I really like this!

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  2. I love your words… 👈✌🤘😀😁 Beautiful as ever..

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  3. Love this and the so clever structure!!

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  4. The words are divine, painting images, but the word spacing adds so much too. The pauses, the flow, the tempo, all part of the construction bringing it to life 🙂

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    1. Nothing like the actual image that was the source of inspiration for this, of course

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      1. Maybe not, those images are truly hard to capture. But your poetry is so good I think I can see it

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  5. OH. MY. GOOOOOODDDDD!!! This is beyond wonderful!!! I burst out laughing with joy. Just brilliant! Yay!!! Thank You and Cheers! 🤗💖

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    1. 🙂 thanks, Katy, your brightness and vibrance are infectious.

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  6. Such beautiful imagery.

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  7. Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    ORT-ORT-ORT-ORT-! LOVE THE ELONGATION OF “W-O-O-L” AND THIS GORGEOUS DESCRIPTION OF A SINSET!

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